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(I don’t really like the rule of “no liners” because then you just end up filling in the rest of your response with meaningless dialogue...
(U guys did like 30 pages without me XD)
(I know it’s just funny to me for some reason.)
Roman turned toward the direction of honey’s voice, scowled and threw a punch to Ryoko’s chest, still grinding like a madman.
Honey: keep it down I’m drawing.)
Kylie cracked her digital neck, it making a loud crunch noise, and began polishing her knife.
Reily backed up a bit as they discussed him like he was something for sale, the vampires pointing out all his flaws and making the...
(How did I miss this much...)
(What did I miss?)
Roman, now in full shadow mode, lunged at Ryoko, slashing his claws at her, grinning wildly, showing off his long sharp teeth.
The short raven boy eventually walked down to the normal floors of the school and plopped himself in a seat next to Ellinor.
“I know your there.” He said, with the tinge of aggravation in his voice. His hands closing around the chocker on his neck.
“I tell you...
Ok this is dead -3-|||
“Uh, I’m getting changed!” He lied. Preparing to attack her if she went in.
"im just a little doll, i couldnt hurt you..."
(They were on the inside of the room but ok, I guess they could be seen from under the door. :/)