consle - second perspective | an entry

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  1. Rin Guinn

    Rin Guinn « ♦️WHO AM I TO YOU ?♦ »

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    #1 Rin Guinn, Jul 29, 2018
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    I am Koharu Sae.

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    I inhale sharply, the words filling my head, thoughts and worry overflowing.

    Where am I? It's so dark. And cold. Why is it cold?

    I look at myself, examining my pale and limber hands. My arms are bare except for a translucent fabric, with a strange, red, strapless shirt covering my torso. The top of my head is weighted - my fingers identifying them as strange horns. The skin of my legs is bare, the shorts being way too short to my liking, but the maroon sneakers were at least comfortable. I also had a black tail, it seems - it was strange to look at, considering it was on my own body.

    Brushing my red-ish black hair out of my face, the darkness was beginning to lift. A small light was on the wall - no, the ground. Was it? I couldn't tell where it was compared to my position, but it was definitely close.

    It got brighter. Should I be worried?

    I felt... calm.

    The light washed over me, my senses sharpening as I heard the sudden chirping of birds and loud chattering conversations. The grass looked soft and welcoming, the wind playing with each blade in patterns. As I looked up, the sun shone brilliantly through the clear blue skies, the warmth seeping into my light skin. Everything felt alive, everything felt... awake.

    There is life here. Where is here?

    My awe was interrupted by the sounds of shouting that was getting too close to my preference.

    "Hey! A newbie just came in. Wow, it's been a while; Be right back, guys, I'm gonna check it out!"

    The voice was smooth, but at the same time, very brash, like a pup excitedly barking at something trivial.

    I turned around, my eyes focusing on a dragon-girl in a blue-red light armor. Her ponytail was long and white, and her forehead was covered by a knight-like helmet. Her ears were dragon's fins, and her arms and face were trimmed with scales like bloodstones.

    She held her body high, her face grinning widely and each of her steps being more confident than the last. Although as she continued her stride, it seemed that I was a bit taller than her.

    This didn't bother her as she stuck out her hand, "Hey! Welcome to... this place. We call it Ayumu. Well, Shelby calls it that, anyway, since he's kinda edgy and also Japanese. I just call it 'the place'."

    Her smile was strangely infectious, but I kept my lips sealed.

    "Not talking yet, eh? Don't worry, everyone finds their voice after a while. It took Mistel three whole days," The girl turned sharply on her heels, walking past the trees into the direction of the rest of the chattering noise.

    I followed her - After all, she seemed like she knew the way around here. Curiosity hasn't really killed me yet, has it?

    It only took a couple of moments for my awe to return.

    The town was plain but lusterous, simple but so detailed. The buildings held their own with unique design for each roof and each door. People walked about, running errands and having conversation.

    It was so... alive.

    The girl turned back to me, snorting a bit - Probably because of how I was staring, so I stopped - and put her hand on my shoulder. Her fingers were chill, but soothing, and the warmth of her red eyes stared back at mine.

    "Yep. Welcome to the place."

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    the beginning/last chapter: a prologue
    next chapter: a guide
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    hey everyone !

    so as you can all obviously tell...
    i tried a different approach this time, haha.

    the editing part of the prologue took a really long time; in fact, it kind of bothered me at how long it took just to post a single thread on just the beginning - and it's also kind of hard when motivation comes and goes frequently.

    thus, i will mainly stick to regular writing - unless there's this cool climax thing that i just have to get an edit for lol.

    also, the titles will always be "a[n] _____" now ! that way, there's consistency (ooor, i can change the title to something else if it's like a super dramatic chapter, which will add suspense).

    they will also start with whoever the character's perspective it will be in. in this one, it was koharu's (obviously lol).

    i hope that you all will continue to read, even with the lack of visuals.

    thanks for reading, stay tuned !!

    ~ rin < 3
     
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    KoolKidz112 Xyan's Xylophone

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    Do you mind if I use one of these for a post? You won’t regret it


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    Rin Guinn « ♦️WHO AM I TO YOU ?♦ »

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    (use one of the characters? :0)

    (and srry for the late reply lol)
     
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    Not really that... but I may do it in the future!
    It’s this really weird in cringy idea I call a Text YTP I made when I was young where if you don’t have the budget for an editing software you can just take a story or transcript and mess it up and stuff and tell the readers to use their imagination as if their watching a real YTP. I’ve made a couple in school.


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    Rin Guinn « ♦️WHO AM I TO YOU ?♦ »

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    idk, lmao - technically their designs don't belong to me in the first place, as they were all used for previous roleplays. if anything, using just the name and the personalities should be fine i guess ??

    pls do give some credit tho oof
     
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    KoolKidz112 Xyan's Xylophone

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    wait wat
    I won’t use images if that’s what you want, and if you just want me to change the characters that’s ok. I’m going to edit it and make it weird instead too, but I’ve kinda stopped thinking about doing this so it’s ok if you don’t


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    Rin Guinn « ♦️WHO AM I TO YOU ?♦ »

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    alrighty ! let me know if you pick it up again tho. i can make some custom character ideas for you (as a mini-commission or something) < 3
     
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    You might be thinking of me making like an AU, but that sounds like a good idea! Yeah I might resort to making that, this is just getting really confusing xD I’ll let you know, thanks!


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