So You Think You Can Write

Discussion in 'Fan Fiction' started by stars_, Mar 18, 2019.

  1. Theis

    Theis Just another face in the crowd

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    I'm not very good at critique, so sorry if the feedback sucks...

    (I'm also late but pretend I'm on time lol)

    I found this entry to be quite interesting! Though, I'm not familiar with the source material, so some things in the story might have gone over my head. Overall, I felt that the story had a darker and serious feel to it, which lends itself well to the prompt topic of death. It felt a bit short, and the ending seemed a bit vague, though that does add an air of mystery to the story, which, if that was the intention, was done well.

    Ooh, I liked this one a lot! The characterization was really engaging to me, even though not much was directly stated, merely implied, which made it all the more enjoyable to fill in the blanks with my mind. The level of detail really immersed me into the prompt, and the ending makes me kinda want a sequel...

    Anyways, for this prompt, I'm picking @Zeroth as the winner.

    So, uh...yeah. Good job, guys.
     
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  2. Zeroth

    Zeroth 『0th』

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    Thank you for your feedback. My entry for the last prompt used two characters I've written about the most, and a lot of the posts could be found here. Moving from there, here's the next prompt :

    Prompt: Your main character is trying to rescue their loved one from the story's antagonist, having had little idea that the two really were the same. You are free to write it from anyone's POV, including characters that were neither one of them.

    Deadline: 7:00 AM, Greenwich Mean Time, April 22th, 2019

    Rules:
    - All writers are welcome to submit their take on the prompt.
    - Constructive feedback is welcome and encouraged
    - Your entry must be written. script/play format is fine, but please, no videos or just images (though including an illustration with your story is fine)
    - Entries can be any length, but should be more than a sentence or two.
    - Please keep content in the PG-13 realm as per forum rules. Gratuitous violence, sexuality, or language is probably a bad idea.
    -While not a top priority, spelling and grammar are important, so proofreading your work is highly reccomended.

    Pinglist:
    @Zeku @YandereKay_BTSKookie @Theis @Damien the Summoner @Kikicocobell @Happle @stars_ @: ] @Shian @Just Kenneth @Zeroth @Bratitude

    Good luck to the participants !
     
  3. : ]

    : ] Earl Phantomhive

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    (Wait, whom are the same?)
     
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  4. Zeroth

    Zeroth 『0th』

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    (The main character's love interest and the antagonist)