Tell me about your OCs back story and i’ll rate it!

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  1. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    2582F8BA-0875-483A-BBE0-E45FAA600403.png I want to rate your back story’s! for an example: this is otchi! she’s 16 and a student in high school. When she was 8 she walked in on her mother having an affair with her dads brother. For a week she dealed with the guilt of knowing her mother was cheating but after that she snapped. She stole money from her parents and got a couple buses and trains to the other side of the country. she dyed her hair blue (it was originally brown) and joined foster care. She was going to use her real name (Nina) but when she realises it would be easier to track her down she made her name (otchi). she is presumed dead by her family and the only one who knows she ran away was adiee.

    i give my own a 6/10

    you’ll get lower marks if it’s really cliche so give me your most creative backstory! make sure you include any powers or notable information! it doesn’t have to be your main and you can give me as many ocs as you want!
     
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  2. Smolwolfy

    Smolwolfy Someone who loves tea and coffee

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    Lel, my OC if my prof pic, She didn't really grow up with a tragic backstory, just a little bullying here and there, because she honestly is awful at defending herself, but she hides her wolf ears, tail, and wings due to being different, she only showed them to her closest friends and they didn't mind one bit, Even though everyone else also is part Pokemon, animal etc. She's just the most common type of hybrid, she has her whole family alive, she's 14 and she often wears whatever she finds, she's also a weeb with a crush on an anime character.
     
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  3. Laddi

    Laddi +'-A CELPHALON CHAT COP-'+/ A FLIPPIN ROOM CLEANER

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    An alien that likes sugar so he travels around the galaxy looking for candy, and his name is acidity ;-;
     
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  4. SushiCat Nya

    SushiCat Nya friend of Iroh, O.W.L initiate

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    [​IMG] my two main OCs, Sushi and Mado, there twins, living with there mom or with there dad and step mom, Sushi (my main girl) is sweet, kind, and LOVES sushi, is kinda untidy and doesn’t always brush her ears and tail, unlike Mado, who’s a bit of a neat freak, and can often be seen brushing her hair, ears, and tail. Mado also is a bit more dark and brooding, but not to be considered ‘goth’. Mado loves a nice cup of ramen or miso soup, there backstory, Mado was teased when she was young, but Sushi was always there, always willing to play catfight (a game the girls made up, played by turning to their cat form, and jumping at the same time while batting at the other), and just plain cheerful, Sushi loves animals and won’t hesitate to help one, while still enjoying hunting with Star, her sensei, (Mado also trains with Star)
     
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  5. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    7/10 that’s really good! why does she hide them though?
     
  6. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    for now he gets a 5/10 but i need a picture lol
     
  7. SushiCat Nya

    SushiCat Nya friend of Iroh, O.W.L initiate

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    I’m confused you quoted meh thing but didn’t write anything T.T


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  8. PinkFlower7

    PinkFlower7 Addicted to Jojo

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    the backstory how flower got her power

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    Flower is an ordinary child who once gained extraordinary power. At that time, she's going out and walking in the park as usual. Then, she felt there was something strange about the park. The usually sunny park becomes cloudy and dark. Flower thought that this was just plain cloudy. But strangely, when it happened, there was no wind or thunder. Plus, it's very dark and cold. Flower is scared and cold. Then, she saw a light in the middle of the forest. She wanted to find out what light it was and she went there to find out. After arriving, it turns out it's just sunlight. When Flower wants to go back to home, suddenly Flower is struck by a very large lightning bolt. Strangely, she's fine without the slightest wound. She was confused because of that strange incident and then went home. The next day, Flower left to look for a wise man. After asking the local people, she finally got information. She went to the house of a wise old man, and she chatted for a while. After a little greeting, she said her purpose and asked what was meant by the strange incident that were happened last night. The old man was surprised, because of Flower's story. He said that Flower is the chosen one. Flower didn't understand the point, she asked and then the old man explained. He explained that he was finding out for who is the one that gets the power of electricity. The man said that the chosen one's are those who can use it wisely. Flower is shocked (because she gets the power of electricity. get it? Haha) and she thinks it's better if she can control the power of his lightning. Flower thanked the old man, then went home.

    anyways, what is cliche?
     
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  9. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    aw that was nice. you get a 6.9/10 (lmao) not quite a 7 but very close! the design is a bit plain and i don’t know how she knew to go to the old man but other then that it’s good. she definitely has flaws (insecurity coward ness etc) but that’s a good thing! you could make the design a lot flashyer (pun intended). But it’s really pretty none the less!

    a cliche is a trope you see over and over
     
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  10. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    eek i’ll do it now
     
  11. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    it looks like you put a lot of thought into both of them! 6/10 for sushi shes a bit cliche and i don’t see any bad traits? but other then that she has a beautiful and clean design! i love the blue tips in her hair! 7.5/10 for Mado. I don’t know how the bullying plays into her backstory? maybe to be closer to sushi? idk but i love the fact their eyes colours are switched[/QUOTE]
     
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    PinkFlower7 Addicted to Jojo

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    i write that for a little long, but that's okay. it's better to get a 6.9/10 than nothing! thanks for your rate!
     
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  13. Lunatic wolf

    Lunatic wolf Gacha Summoner

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    The girl on the left of my profile pic is alpha she was born to a poor family but her passion of music gave them hope in the streets she would mask herself and call herself alpha (her real name is demonica) she would sing for money on the right is Claudia she was born in a rich family and was spoiled.alpha hated mean girls so she transformed her . They fell in love (alpha’s 19 Claudia is 18
     
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  14. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    alpha gets a 7/10! her story is great and i like how she changed a spoiled brat to a good girl! Claudia gets 8/10!!! I’m going to admit it. the name claudia is my all time favourite name and her design is beautiful! i like that she’s rich! I’m tired of all the poor ocs. she doesn’t have as much of a developed backstory as alpha but it’s still good!!
     
  15. Laddi

    Laddi +'-A CELPHALON CHAT COP-'+/ A FLIPPIN ROOM CLEANER

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    Profile picture .-.
     
  16. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    ah then 6/10
     
  17. Varius_is_not_me

    Varius_is_not_me Scarlet Flare's Flame

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    Oh boy, prepare the para-edgy mask cuz it's gonna be long !

    Arcan is the first born of a royal family, because he had a "weird" temper he was given to two old servants who took care of him like their own child. His temper faded while growing up and he began to socialize which also helped him, at the age of 14 he was just like the other kids, a bit sensitive but nothing much. When he was 20, his two caretakers died of old age, he returned to the king and queen who had a new son, Abigail. Even tho they had replaced him, Arcan was in great need of affection so he accepted his parents and their family was whole again. However it did not last long, after a big argument with his parents, Abigail snapped, poisoned his parent's food and ran away. The queen died, the king nearly passed and a servant died as well. This crime triggered Arcan's temper and he snapped again swearing he would commit a fratricide for justice.

    Told you it was gonna be edgy !
     

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  18. adi33

    adi33 my ocs are my children

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    i love really edgy story lines!! 9/10!!!!! i love the fact he needs affection. it makes him feel more human. the design is really clean and frankly he kinda scares me! i don’t know what the purpose of having two of the caretakers served but other wise it’s really good! i hope i get to see more of him in the future!
     
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  19. Smolwolfy

    Smolwolfy Someone who loves tea and coffee

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    Thanks for the score, she thinks her being a hyrbrid makes her S P E C I A L so she open sees herself as a hunted lab expirment
     
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  20. Luna

    Luna Jasmine

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    why not do this to Jasmine my first oc (her Name was Actuallly Luna but its different on what i use between Platforms)

    Wolf Jas.png Jasmine Had to Leave Home when she was young with her Cousin, She has lived in the human world Causing Trouble and Mischief, shes Known as the Villages Thief, She Never liked Being center of Attention since she was known in the demon world in a good way she changed from when she was younger, she trained with Magic in the forest She uses Darkness magic and She Has A Spirit Know as Luna that Sometimes uses Jasmines body as a Host and if someone finds out Luna Taunts them. Luna Likes Going by Moon more Though.Jasmine has Always Hated Loud Sounds since it irritated her ears Alot and sometimes Jasmine actually wears Glasses but its rare for her to She Uses Needles and Daggers as weapons
    Age: depends (it could be 11 to 13)
    Birthday:May first
    Fullname: Jasmine Luna Midnight
     
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