The World of Lumine! (Ch.2 - 3)

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How should this story continue?

  1. Let's get straight to the new location!

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  2. A little detour might be interesting!

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  1. Project

    Project Still kinda Inactive~ Still doing her best~☆

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    THE WORLD OF LUMINE!
    -- Chapter 2: Questions --
    "My name is Luni! Welcome to the Gatchaverse! What's your name?"
    Fennec stood up, wiping her watery eyes. She shook her head unsure what to tell the girl.
    "My name is... Fennec... I think..."
    Luni approached her with a worried look on her face.
    "Are you crying? I'm really sorry you had to be by yourself for a long time, Fennec."
    "I'm not crying!" Fennec barked, blushing heavily. "Your light is just really blinding!"
    Luni smiled in relief. The light behind her began to dim slowly until it was no longer there.
    With the light gone, Fennec was able to analyze Luni a lot closer.

    She's actually pretty cute... Fennec thought to herself.
    Luni's smile widened almost as if she could hear exactly what Fennec was thinking.
    Fennec quickly looked away in response. Her face began to heat up. Her heartbeat became rapid once more. She took deep breaths, while Luni patiently waited for her to compose herself.
    After a brief moment of silence, Fennec spoke out.

    "Where am I? How did I get here?"
    "This is the Gatchaverse. Well kinda... This is actually the final stage before entering it. I just need to formally recognize you and answer any questions you may have. Afterwards, I'll be sending you there."
    "Okay... but how did I get here? How come I don't remember anything prior to waking up here?"
    Luni paused, carefully thinking over what to say next.
    "Well," Luni began, "you don't have any memories prior to this place because you still didn't exist..."
    Fennec stared at her dumbfounded. Being told something like that is a lot to take in. Still, Fennec tried her best to accept it and continued her questioning.

    "Why am I here? What's my purpose for existence? And are you the one who made me?"
    "That's something for you to find out on your own!" Luni smiled. "As for that last question of yours, no. I'm not the one who created you."
    Suddenly, a buzzing sound began to emit from Luni's jacket pocket.
    "Well then," Luni spoke, "that will be it for our discussion. You have a very nice personality to you, Fennec! I'm sure that you'll fit in just fine!"
    "Wait! Hold on!" Fennec panicked. "Who made-"
    But before she could finish her sentence, a portal opened up below her causing her to fall into the unknown. The portal then closed, leaving Luni all alone.
    She smiled to herself, then pulled out a phone from her jacket pocket opening it up to an unknown contact.
    LUNI!!! Look at this adorable little guy I found on my way to my gig!

    Attached to the message was a picture of little duckling.
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    AAAAA DUCKY SOOO CUUUTEE!!! ♡♡♡♡ , she texted the contact. oh btw, your creator has a little surprise for you!
    Ooooo what is it???? the contact replied back immediately.
    Its a secret! Just keep an eye out for a fanblade similar to yours!
    ...
    Fennec blinked slowly. The impact of the fall had blurred her vision. There was a bruising pain all around her body.
    Despite this, Fennec was still able to make out some aspects about the world around her. It was all very green. The sounds of chirping and buzzing could be heard all around her. The ground felt cold and moist, but soft. A slight breeze was blowing in wind.
    This must be the Gatchaverse, Fennec thought to herself. I need to get moving... but this place... makes me feel... so...

    Before Fennec could even finish her thought, her eyes closed and she drifted into a peaceful sleep.
    ...
    Fennec slowly opened her eyes, feeling rather sleepy despite taking a nap. Her vision was still blurry and it was still hard to make out the world around her. For the most part it seemed the same. However, her heightened sense of hearing picked up a strange, unfamiliar sound. It sounded like a muffled voice.
    Fennec rolled over on her back only to be greeted by the strangest vision...

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    "Hey!" the strange figure called out. It continued to speak, but Fennec was unable to understand anything else it said.
    "Hi," she replied, dismissing everything else the figure had to say.
    Fennec let out a small yawn, then drifted back to sleep...

    -- END OF CHAPTER 2 --
    -- Intermission --

    Featured Character: Rhianne
    Creator: @rule_breaker 18
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    Come Check out the works made by @rule_breaker 18 as well! Trust me, they're worth it!

    -- Disclosure --
    The following contains OC's created by other users. The story may alter their personalities and behaviors and IS NOT a reflection of what the original creators intended them to be. A snack or a beverage to enjoy while reading is advised.

    -- Chapter 3: The Journey Begins! --

    Fennec awoke feeling refreshed. Her vision finally cleared up allowing her to see the world around her more clearly.
    She found herself surrounded by several tall trees that allowed only a little light to break through the leaves.

    Where am I? Fennec thought, trying her best to recollect everything that had just happened. Oh, that's right... I'm in this 'Gatchaverse' now...
    "Hey, are you okay?" a voice interrupted her thoughts.
    Startled, Fennec propped herself up to a sitting position only to be greeted by another strange girl.
    The girl leaned forward, offering Fennec her hand. She wore a bright teal jacket with a blue hood, a double layered skirt, blue leggings and shoes, black headphones and black glasses. Her hair was long, dark and blowing in the wind. The forest light illuminated her already fair skin. Her silver eyes showed worry and concern for the frightened Fennec.

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    "Who are you?" Fennec asked the girl.
    "My name is Rhianne," the girl spoke, helping Fennec up onto her feet.
    "I haven't seen you around before. Are you new here?"
    Fennec hesitated, then spoke.
    "Yeah... I just got dropped in a while ago..."
    "I know. I saw..."
    There was an awkward silence between them.
    "What's your name?"
    "Fennec."
    "Well Fennec, welcome to Gatcha Woods! If you're new here, then I suggest that you head for one of the towns."
    Rhianne raised her arm and pointed to her left.
    "The closest one from here is Gotcha Kingdom over in that direction. A lot of people who are new to the Gatchaverse tend to congregate there, so I'm sure that you'll make plenty of friends and find out anything you want to know about there!"
    "Thank you" Fennec spoke. "You've been a huge help."
    "No problem!" Rhianne smiled. "Stay Safe!"

    "Thank you, Rhianne. I will."
    Fennec began to walk in the direction Rhianne had pointed. She was unaware and a little frightened by what was in store for her down this path, but with people like Rhianne around, Fennec felt comfortable with this new world and all that it had to throw at her.
    "Hey wait!" Rhianne yelled from behind her. "You forgot this!"
    Fennec quickly turned around just in time to catch a strange black object. She analyzed the object carefully unsure exactly what it was. It was long, rectangular and rather heavy for its size with what appeared to be a razor sharp diamond on one end of it. It felt as if it were made of steel or iron. She continued to analyze it, when suddenly out of nowhere Fennec knew exactly what the strange item was.
    She flicked her wrist causing the object to unfold into a majestic, red fan blade. A strange black symbol was printed on one of the fabric pieces close to the center. It resembled that of a fox with what appeared to be two fans.
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    "Wait this isn't..."
    Fennec looked up and realized that Rhianne was gone. Deciding that it would be useless to try and clear up the confusion, Fennec closed the fan blade and continued towards the path she was pointed towards.
    Alright then, Fennec thought to herself, Next stop, Gatcha Kingdom! This is where the journey begins!
    -- END OF CHAPTER 3 --
     
  2. Project

    Project Still kinda Inactive~ Still doing her best~☆

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    REAL QUICK

    - I may consider adding more OC's to this story

    - I just might consider adding YOUR OC to it!

    - Want your OC in this story? comment below:

    1. Their name

    2. A picture of them

    3. Their species/race

    4. Their gatcha element (Fire, water, grass, dark, light)

    5. Their personality/character traits

    6. Their role or job in the Gatchaverse

    7. Their weapon (if any)

    8. Their pet's name & a picture (if any)

    9. A brief background story

    10. Any other info that maybe useful to the creation process

    - Commenting all this DOES NOT guarantee a place in this story, but I will always try to incorporate as many as I can!

    - Any OC's used will ALWAYS be properly credited and will most likely appear in an Illustration created by me

    - you may have noticed some spelling errors or other mishaps... please pretend they werent there... thanks a bundle
     
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  3. Rhianne

    Rhianne ✿Binge Watcher of any kind✿

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    Ahhh!!! I love it <3
     
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  4. Makoto Eguchi

    Makoto Eguchi ~Sleepy Spirit~

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    Noice! :0
    Can I take a part?
     
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  5. Project

    Project Still kinda Inactive~ Still doing her best~☆

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    Absolutely! All I need is that information above! Message me or just comment below, either will work!
     
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  6. Makoto Eguchi

    Makoto Eguchi ~Sleepy Spirit~

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    #6 Makoto Eguchi, Aug 4, 2018
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    - Her name is Makoto Eguchi
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    - She's... A human?
    - Darkness!
    - Personalities
    • She's... A slacker when she doesn't have any bloodlust...
    • Loves crossdressing
    • She can be a Tsundere...
    • Doesn't smiles a lot...
    • She also ignorant, but~ just give her some mochi and she'll give you all the attention (1 mochi/10 minutes).
    - Assassin
    Those two that she holds, you can ignore the patterns(?)~ just... Don't ignore the shape and the Gemini symbol of the weapon ^^[​IMG]
    - "Does Makito, counts?" - Innocent? Makoto
    - She has a twin (but not sibling) named Makito. They both got separated each other by their guardian, that's a twin sisters. They promised to find reunites again one day. And now, Makoto Is wandering around to find her twin since her guardian allows her.
     
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  7. Rhianne

    Rhianne ✿Binge Watcher of any kind✿

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    you change her style? :0
     
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  8. Makoto Eguchi

    Makoto Eguchi ~Sleepy Spirit~

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    Hmm? What do you mean? Her hair? Well, her hair does sometimes changes... Sometimes loose, twin tail, braids, or low ponytail.
     
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    Rhianne ✿Binge Watcher of any kind✿

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    Pretty 0w0
     
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  10. Celestite

    Celestite KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF THEM

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    #10 Celestite, Aug 4, 2018
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    I want to take part on it

    Celestite
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    (Still too cringy)

    - human

    - water

    - psyho but good

    - sometimes edgy

    - overpowered

    - her role is to save the world from any danger

    - can use crystal magic

    - immortal

    - princess

    - her backstory:
    Celestite is a princess who is a Assassin,DJ and a detective.she used to live with her family,now she lives in a crystal cave with electricity and WiFi

    - Weapon: all kinds of blades like dagger and scyth

    You can take her in any chapter
     
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